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Comments on One Life (NEW VERSION) (LoFi HiFi) by joner:
OtherGeneHilbert
Date: January 11, 2006 @ 12:01 AM

What I'm hearing is very kewl actually, your writing and vocal arrangements are far more ambitious than your technical knowledge and playing ability. I like this because you have to develop to be able to perform your own compositions. I know, because I was the same way.

You have vocal pitch issues, diction isn’t bad but needs work. Being on pitch and understood is fundamental.

What you need to do is keep playing, keep writing, and find yourself a good music teacher. Theory, harmony, arranging, instrumental and vocal scale studies are primary. I hear talent here, do all you can to develop it.
PunkArkham
Date: July 19, 2006 @ 3:52 AM
I will, dont you worry.


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